Hi Ven~!!

Hi Ven. i'm Elly.
it's first time to ask you for correction of my writting..

I'd like to reply to my colleague's question in english as follows;

But, I wonder if it makes sense or not..
your correction would be really helpful.

Thank you so much for your correction in advance!!

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I received the answer from OEK HR.
According to their answer, there is no standard on traveler’s insurance.
Thus, When engineers go on a business trip, if necessary, they could buy traveler’s insurance without air insurance coverage after prior approval and reimburse the cost though MER System.

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Hi, Ven! I'm Elly.
It's my first time to ask you for correction of my writting.

I'd like to reply to my colleague's question in English as you can see below.

But I wonder if it makes sense or not..
Your corrections would be really helpful.

Thank you so much for the corrections in advance!!

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I received the answer from OEK HR.
There is no standard on traveller’s insurance according to them.
Thus, when engineers go on a business trip they could buy traveller’s insurance if necessary without air insurance coverage after the approval and reimburse the cost through MER System.

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