The power of kindness

While I was crying, one person got in the elevator.
She took me home after asking me why I was crying.
I was very grateful to her.
Through her kindness, I became more positive about the world and I was more polite to my neighbors.
To be honest, I am still a little afraid of taking the elevator.
But, I'm sure sombody will help me when I need help.
Because there are so many kind people in my neighborhood.
I believe kindness can make everything better.

While I was crying, someone got in the elevator.
She took me home after asking me why I was crying. She asked me why I was crying. Then she took me home.
I was very grateful to her.
Through her kindness, I became more positive about the world and became more polite to my neighbors.
To be honest, I am still a little afraid of taking the elevator.
But, I'm sure somebody will help me when I need help.
Because there are so many kind people in my neighborhood.
I believe kindness can make everything better.

 

Note: You did well, Miss Amy. I crossed out some words and the italized words were the words I added.