The power of kindness

I'd like to tell you about my story.
A few days ago, I had an embarrassing incident.
I took the elevator to go home after school.
There were so many people in the elevator.
I pressed the button which I live on.
However, it was the wrong number because I couldn't see the number plate.
So, I got off the wrong floor.
I took the elevator, again and pressed the button.
But, the elevator kept stopping on the different floor.
Suddenly, I was so scared and began to cry.

I'd like to tell you about my a story.
A few days ago, I had an embarrassing incident.
I took the elevator to go home after school.
There were so many people in the elevator.
I pressed the button which I live on.
However, it was the wrong number because I couldn't see the number plate very well.
So, I got off the wrong floor.
I took the elevator again and pressed the button.
But, the elevator was continuously stopping on the different floor.
Suddenly, I was so scared and began to cry.

 

Note: You did well, Miss Amy. I crossed out some words and the italized words were the words I added.