Tomorrow, she will go on a picnic with her family. She was worried about the weather, so she turned on the TV. Fortunately, the weather forecast says it will be sunny tomorrow. She said, "It'll be a clear day! We have to think about what to do tomorrow.", to her brother and sister, who were eating soup. They look like they are having fun, and I'm looking forward to this week's picnic. I'm very excited, and I can't wait for tomorrow!
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Tomorrow, she will go on a picnic with her family. She was worried about the weather, so she turned on the TV right away (no need to include). Fortunately, the weather forecast says it will be sunny tomorrow. She said (to) her brother and sister, who were eating soup, “It’ll be a clear day! We have to think about what to do tomorrow.” They especially (not needed in the sentence) looks (Thye = plural, looks - singular verb) like they are having fun. I’m also looking forward to this week’s picnic. I’m excited!
