The country I visit is France. France is very famous in Europe because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France? I will see the Eiffel Tower, Are de Triomphe, the Louvre museum and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do, the Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand and the Louvre museum's famous work of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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France
2022.04.25
The country I visit is the France.France is very famous in the Europe. Because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France. I will see the Eiffel Tower,Are de Triomphe, Louvre museum.and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do,Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand And Louvre museum famous works of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures of the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 4주
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side by side 2 (Junior course)
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6960
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[4번째 영작 첨삭]
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6959
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6958
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[3번째 영작 첨삭]
whether
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6957
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[54번째 영작 첨삭]
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6956
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[4번째 영작 첨삭]
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6955
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
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6954
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[231번째 영작 첨삭]
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6953
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[230번째 영작 첨삭]
Hotel
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2025.03.02
6952
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[229번째 영작 첨삭]
Hotel
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2025.03.02
6951
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[228번째 영작 첨삭]
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6950
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[227번째 영작 첨삭]
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6949
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[4번째 영작 첨삭]
happyest day
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6948
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[51번째 영작 첨삭]
My memorable travel.
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6947
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[12번째 영작 첨삭]
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6946
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[13번째 영작 첨삭]
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6945
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
sorry
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[6번째 영작 첨삭]
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