The country I visit is France. France is very famous in Europe because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France? I will see the Eiffel Tower, Are de Triomphe, the Louvre museum and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do, the Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand and the Louvre museum's famous work of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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France
2022.04.25
The country I visit is the France.France is very famous in the Europe. Because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France. I will see the Eiffel Tower,Are de Triomphe, Louvre museum.and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do,Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand And Louvre museum famous works of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures of the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 2 (Junior course)
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튜터
작성일
3779
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Report of yesterday's lesson
South
2022.12.13
3778
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[1번째 영작 첨삭]
The first of my note.
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2022.12.12
3777
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Games
Gail
2022.12.12
3776
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[1번째 영작 첨삭]
How do I pronounce it ?
-
2022.12.12
3775
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Iphone is mine.
Herrchie
2022.12.12
3774
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[12번째 영작 첨삭]
good day
Kimmy
2022.12.12
3773
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[3번째 영작 첨삭]
the sun
-
2022.12.11
3772
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[23번째 영작 첨삭]
Play with Liky
-
2022.12.11
3771
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[21번째 영작 첨삭]
last monday
Lin
2022.12.09
3770
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[11번째 영작 첨삭]
good day
Kimmy
2022.12.09
3769
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[18번째 영작 첨삭]
Doing P.E. at the classroom
Jana
2022.12.09
3768
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[36번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
-
2022.12.09
3767
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Good night ^^
-
2022.12.08
3766
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[19번째 영작 첨삭]
PAINT(4)
Maribel
2022.12.08
3765
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[18번째 영작 첨삭]
PAINT(3)
Maribel
2022.12.08
3764
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[17번째 영작 첨삭]
PAINT(2)
Maribel
2022.12.08
3763
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[16번째 영작 첨삭]
PAINT(1)
Maribel
2022.12.08
3762
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[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Report of yesterday’s lesson
South
2022.12.08
3761
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[19번째 영작 첨삭]
Last day with club members
Harlyn
2022.12.06
3760
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[18번째 영작 첨삭]
With my unversity friends.
Harlyn
2022.12.06