should people save money for the future? I think yes,we have to . First when we didn't save money for the future,we will be very hungry. second,we couldn't but what we want in the future. than, it would be so stressful for us. third,we can't enjoy the peaceful life. we need money in the future but you don't have money, you shouldwark more harder.
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Should people save money for the future? I think yes,we have to . First, if we don't save money for the future, we will be very hungry. Second,we can't buy what we want in the future. Then, it will be so stressful for us. Lastly, we can't enjoy the peaceful life. We need money in the future and if you don't have money, you should work harder.
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