Today we went to the camp with my friend.
So we waked up ulery. We packy things.
and we went to the camping. My father set up the tent. My mother cooking a dinner. And l played the bedminton. And an hour later we ate the dinner. We ate steak, and rice. After dinner we baked the marshmallow and corn. And we were sing and song.
Camping
Today we went to the camp with my friend.
So we waked up ulery. We packy things.
and we went to the camping. My father set up the tent. My mother cooking a(x) dinner. And l played the(x) bedminton. And an hour later we ate the(x) dinner. We ate steak ,(x) and rice. After dinner we baked the marshmallow and corn. And we were(x) sing and(x) song.
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Today we went to the camp with my friend. So we woke up early. We pack things and we went to the camping site. My father set up the tent. My mother cooked dinner. And l played badminton. And an hour later we ate dinner. We ate steak and rice. After dinner, we baked the marshmallow and corn. And we sang a song.
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