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Yesterday, I went to the job interview, which i hadn’t done in a long time.
Nowadays I feel a little bit depressed and unstable. So I thought I had to find a job in hurry. Anyway, when I’m taking an interview, some questions of interviewer make me feel bad. She asked me if I can show my instagram feed for her. And also she asked me about my weights and heights. Even she asked me if I have a boyfriend or not. I couldn’t understand why she asked me that kinds of rude questions. In addition the wages I saw on the webpage, which the company wrote was different with the one she said to me. It was way too low than the one I saw. After the interview, way back into home, I felt devastated. And I thought it’s better to take enough time to apply a company or find another way to earn money.

Yesterday, I went to a job interview, which I hadn’t done in a long time.
Nowadays, I feel a little bit depressed and unstable, so I thought I had to find a job immediately. Anyway, when I was taking the interview, some questions of the interviewer made me feel bad. She asked me if I could show my her instagram feed, she also asked me about my weight and height and if I have a boyfriend or not. I couldn’t understand why she asked me those kinds of rude questions. In addition, the wages I saw on the webpage, which the company wrote was different with the one she said to me. It was way too low than the one I saw. After the interview, I went back home feeling devastated. I thought it’s better to take enough time to apply in a company or find another way to earn money.

 

Hi, Sun!

This is a good composition and you have written your experiences really well. Your points are clear and easy to be understood, however you must be careful on the usage of verb tenses. Please take note that when you are narrating past experiences, you must use simple past tense since the action was already over. Also, the proper use of punctuation marks is also essential in writing, so you need to learn on how to use them appropriately. 

I hope everything will get better for you soon. You can do it!


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