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Ch1. Are you busy?

Hi, jean teacher!
I am eunmi.
The best thing I did this year was to know you.
I always wanted to speak English well, but I didn't have a confidence to speak it .
I determined to study English once, that's why I meet you.
I'll do the best in our class expecting to speak freely well.

from now on,
I am going to try to write my thought about last chapter.
today is about ch1."Are you busy?"

I'm a public survant. I work for 8 hours.
I'm sure that my work is very stressful but I have lots of free time after work comparing with other occupation in korea.
I don't have a overtime but I don't know how to spend my time useful.
I used to watch a TV, play to use my cellphone, sleep too much...

as like the old saying "the time is the gold", I need to think about how to spend the time to be useful.

Thank you for reading my story. Have a great day, teahcer. Thank you.

Hi, jean teacher!
I am eunmi.
The best thing I did this year was to know you.
I always wanted to speak English well, but I didn't have a confidence to speak it .
I determined to study English once, that's why I meet you.
I'll do the best in our class expecting to speak freely well.

from now on,
I am going to try to write my thought about last chapter.
today is about ch1."Are you busy?"

I'm a public survant. I work for 8 hours.
I'm sure that my work is very stressful but I have lots of free time after work comparing with other occupation in korea.
I don't have a overtime but I don't know how to spend my time useful.
I used to watch a TV, play to use my cellphone, sleep too much...

as like the old saying "the time is the gold", I need to think about how to spend the time to be useful.

Thank you for reading my story. Have a great day, teahcer. Thank you.

 

(CORRECTIONS)

Hi, Teacher Jean!
I am Eunmi.
The best thing I did this year was to know you.
I have always wanted to speak English well but, I didn't have confidence. 
I was determined to study English once, that's why I meet you.
I'll do my best in our class expecting to speak freely.

From now on, I am going to try to write my thoughts about the last chapter.
today was about Chapter 1 "Are you busy?"

I'm a public survant. I work for 8 hours.
I'm sure that my work is very stressful but, I have lots of free time after work compared with other occupation in Korea.
I don't work overtime but I don't know how to spend my time. 
I used to watch TV, playing using my cellphone and sleep too much.

As like the old saying "time is the gold", I need to think about how to spend the time. 

Thank you for reading my story. Have a great day, Teacher. Thank you.


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