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Hi~ Venice~ How are you?
Are you OK? I heard that you passed out in office on Friday.
do you have a anemia? Or do you have tired these day?
I hope you get better soon.
I spent my whole terrible weekend ㅠㅠ
As you know, today is TOEIC test but I didn't take a test because I didn't get up early..
I didn't hear my alarm.. so I got sleep until 9:00 am.. It's too late to go to ready..
So I have felt bad for all the day. I am so stupid to do that.
Today of all days, I am so angry at myself. I was annyoded with myself with a lot sleeping.

Do you have this stupid episode?

Hi~ Venice~ How are you?
Are you OK? I heard that you passed out in office on Friday.
do you have a anemia? Or do you have tired these day?
I hope you get better soon.
I spent my whole terrible weekend ㅠㅠ
As you know, today is TOEIC test but I didn't take a test because I didn't get up early..
I didn't hear my alarm.. so I got sleep until 9:00 am.. It's too late to go to ready..
So I have felt bad for all the day. I am so stupid to do that.
Today of all days, I am so angry at myself. I was annyoded with myself with a lot sleeping.

Do you have this stupid episode?


Hi~ Venice~ How are you?
Are you OK? I heard that you passed out in your office (on) last Friday.
Do you have an anemia? Or (do) were you (have) tired these past few days?
I hope you get better soon.
I spent my whole (terrible) weekend terribly ㅠㅠ
As you know, today is the TOEIC test but I (didn't) wasn't able to take (a test) it because I didn't get up early.
I didn't hear my alarm, so I (got sleepwas sleeping until 9:00 am.. It was too late to (go to) get ready.
So I (have) felt bad (for) all (the) day. I (am) was so stupid to do that.
(Today of all days, I am so angry at myself.) I was annoyed (with) to myself (with a lot) for sleeping alot.

Do you have this stupid episode? -->
Have you ever experienced this thing too?


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