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Dear Manager

Hi, My name is Jay. I would like to apply for a barista position.

I have an experience at a café for 3 years. I’ve worked at various cafes both in South Korea and Australia. I learned skills of making coffee in the café where I’ve worked for the first time. I took an order and made coffee. I always served coffee to the customer with a big smile. I also cleaned the store and displayed sandwiches and cakes. I’ve worked in a very busy café. In there I could communicate with coworkers to deal with orders. It was very helpful experience. With this experience I expect I can adjust to work very quickly.

I think I am very easy-going and positive person. I like having a conversation with customers and coworkers. Also I'm punctual and fast learner.

I hope we can work together. I’ll wait for your contact.

Thank you.

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