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Hi~ Venice

I am sorry that I can't answer the phone call yesterday because I put on my cell phone in my friend's car.
When I noticed that there wasn't my cell phone, it's already 6:30 pm. So I went to the car and I check my cell phone pop up five unanswer the call to you ㅠㅠ I'm so sorry.

Yesterday, I met my friends for a long time. We met six months ago. One of my friends got married six months ago.
After listening Her marrige story, I thought the marrige is better to get laterㅋㅋㅋㅋ and marrige is to get not a couple,
but being family. She is worrying about her husband's mother. There is a religion troble beteween them.
Anyway, I learned many things about making family and live as wife.

I'm still sick my stomach since yesterday.. I ate pizza with my friends. Pizza is quite greasy to me ㅠㅠ
Venice see you in a moment. I'll talk to you the rest of stroy.. Bye ^_^

Hi~ Venice

I am sorry that I can't answer the phone call yesterday because I put on my cell phone in my friend's car.
When I noticed that there wasn't my cell phone, it's already 6:30 pm. So I went to the car and I check my cell phone pop up five unanswer the call to you ㅠㅠ I'm so sorry.

Yesterday, I met my friends for a long time. We met six months ago. One of my friends got married six months ago.
After listening Her marrige story, I thought the marrige is better to get laterㅋㅋㅋㅋ and marrige is to get not a couple,
but being family. She is worrying about her husband's mother. There is a religion troble beteween them.
Anyway, I learned many things about making family and live as wife.

I'm still sick my stomach since yesterday.. I ate pizza with my friends. Pizza is quite greasy to me ㅠㅠ
Venice see you in a moment. I'll talk to you the rest of stroy.. Bye ^_^


Hi~ Venice

I am sorry that I (can't) didn’t answer the phone call yesterday because I put on my cell phone in my friend's car.
When I noticed that I (there) wasn't bringing my cell phone, it was already 6:30 pm. So I went to the car and I checked (my cell phone) it. (pop up) I saw that there were five unanswered (the) calls (to) from you
ㅠㅠ I'm so sorry.

Yesterday, I met my friends whom I haven’t seen for a long time. The last time we met was six months ago and one of my friends got married at that time. (six months ago.)
After listening to her marriage story, I thought that it is better to get married when you are ready (the marrige is better to get later)ㅋㅋㅋㅋ and that marriage is not about getting a partner (to get not a couple,)
but being a family. She is worrying about her husband's mother. There is a religion trouble between them.
Anyway, I learned many things about making a family and living as a wife.

I'm still sick my stomach since yesterday..  I still have a stomachache since yesterday. I ate pizza with my friends. Pizza is quite greasy to me ㅠㅠ
Venice, see you in a moment. I'll (talk) tell to you the rest of story later. Bye ^_^


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