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Peppermint tea

Today mom and I went out to buy a chamomile tea and play.
But it was too windy outside.
So we had to buy the chamomile tea and not play outside.
But I changed my mind and bought peppermint tea.
But the taste wasn't good.

Today we go to a gimbap store.
On the way we go to a convenient store to get mom's post box.
And the host gave me a candy.
I said thanks.
We went to the gimbap store and boughtg a tuna gimbap and a stake gimbap.
It was delicious.

Today me and my mom go to library.
There were lots of books.
I read a book and It was about a very bad girl.
It was fun reading the book.

Today in dinner my mom and I watched my past video when I was youngger.
I was very cute back then.
And I am still cute.
What a good life I had!

Today mun and I went to a kids Cafe in 서면.
First we ate lunch at the food store.
And we went to the kid's Cafe.
It was lots of fun playing.

Today we went to a market place.
There was so many things in it.
And we bought some of them.
And I really liked the barley snake.
It was delicious.

Today in school we crafted something and i colored it well.
But it was time to eat lunch and it was delicious.
But I hadn't had enough time to finish the craft.
So I didn't finish it.

Mom and I went out today to play and buy chamomile tea.

But it was too windy outside.So we had to buy the chamomile tea and not play outside.

But I changed my mind and bought peppermint tea.But the taste wasn't good.

Today we will go to a gimbap store. On the way, we stop at a convenience store to get mom's post box.

And the host gave me a piece of candy.I said thanks.

We went to the gimbap store and bought a tuna gimbap and a stake gimbap. It was delicious.

Today my mom and I went to the library. There were lots of books.I read a book, and It was about a very bad girl. It was fun reading the book.

Today at dinner, my mom and I watched my past videos when I was younger. I was very cute back then.And I am still cute.What a good life I had!

Today, Mun and I went to a kid's cafe in Inseomyeon. First, we ate lunch at the food store. And we went to the kid's cafe. It was lots of fun playing.

Today we went to a market place.There were so many things in it. And we bought some of them.And I really liked the barley snake.It was delicious.

Today in school we crafted something and i colored it well. But it was time to eat lunch, and it was delicious.

But I hadn't had enough time to finish the craft.So I didn't finish it.


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