Homework 1

My name is jisung Lee. I'm 12years old.
I live at 1555, Daedeok- daero, Daedeok-gu, Daejeon-si. Geumgang River ExluTower
My Cellphone number is +8201051721898
My birthday is on Junuary 1,2010. I am From the South Korea .

My name is jisung Lee. I'm 12 years old.
I live at 1555, Daedeok- daero, Daedeok-gu, Daejeon-si. Geumgang River ExluTower
My Cellphone number is +8201051721898
My birthday is on Junuary 1,2010. I am From the South Korea . 

 

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My name is Jisung Lee. I'm 12 years old.
I live at 1555, Daedeok- daero, Daedeok-gu, Daejeon-si. Geumgang River ExluTower
My Cellphone number is +8201051721898
My birthday is on January 1,2010. I am from South Korea . 

 

 

 

Jisung Lee -Use capital letters for names.

January -correct spelling

I am from South Korea. "from'' small letter only 

the =Don't need at all.