Title : Cats
Today is Sunday. I went to cut my hair.
At hairshop, there was cute little cats.
I like Simba because he is exercise very much and also he is kind. There was another cats but they aren`t exercise and not kind. Suddenly, dad said "You will cut your hair." So I went to cut my hair. Finishing cut my hair, I was sad. But I will come back SOON!!!
1)Are you ready to our lesson for today?
2)Are you ready for our lesson today?
Are both sentences correct?
January 2th
Title : Cats
Today is Sunday. I went to cut my hair.
At hairshop, there was cute little cats.
I like Simba because he is exercise very much and also he is kind. There was another cats but they aren`t exercise and not kind. Suddenly, dad said "You will cut your hair." So I went to cut my hair. Finishing cut my hair, I was sad. But I will come back SOON!!!
1)Are you ready to our lesson for today?
2)Are you ready for our lesson today?
Are both sentences correct?
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CORRECTIONS
January 2nd
Title : Cats
Today is Sunday. I went to the hair salon to have a haircut.
At the hairshop, I saw cute little cats.
I like Simba because he was very active and kind. There were other cats but theyweren't active nor kind.
Suddenly, my dad said "You will have your haircut now." so I went to cut my hair.
I felt sad after I had a haircut because I have to leave the cats. But I will come back SOON!!!
1)Are you ready to have our lesson for today?
2)Are you ready for our lesson for today?
Are they both correct sentences?
