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Entitle : She's so amazing

I had the lunch with my coworker who will be moved to another corporates one weeks ago.

Yeah. We're put together to celebrate that news and to say goodbye to each other.

We went to japanese restaurant and ordered lunch's special menu.

I had actually been to this restaurant before with another coworker. this place was small but neat and tidy

that's why I choose it again.

I asked her about many things and I was literally shocked that she'd never hated going to work.

What a workholic.....like Rylie

Entitle : She's so amazing

I had the lunch with my coworker who will be moved to another corporates one weeks ago. Remove the ''the'' with lunch / remove the ''s'' on corporates / remove the ''s'' on weeks it should be : week

Yeah. We're put together to celebrate that news and to say goodbye to each other.

We went to japanese restaurant and ordered lunch's special menu. Proper noun should be capitalized : Japanese

I had actually been to this restaurant before with another coworker. this place was small but neat and tidy

that's why I choose it again.

I asked her about many things and I was literally shocked that she'd never hated going to work.

What a workholic.....like Rylie 
 Spelling : workaholic

 


 


I had lunch with my coworker who will be moved to another corporate a week ago.

Yeah. We're put together to celebrate that news and to say goodbye to each other.

We went to a Japanese restaurant and ordered lunch's special menu.

I had actually been to this restaurant before with another coworker. This place was small but neat and tidy

that's why I choose it again.

I asked her about many things and I was literally shocked that she'd never hated going to work.

What a workaholic.....like Rylie.

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