1. A chore that i hate is cleaning the bathroom. you know, I live alone so all the chores in my house are what i have to do.
Sometimes cleaning toilet is weird a little.
2. I usually do exercise in the gym. That's the way how to digest the food that i've eaten.
3. When i feel sick, I go to the hospital and take a medicine and take a break enough.
4. I tend to have meals with chicken breast.
Because chicken breast has no lots of fat, so it can help my body condition.
1. A chore that i hate is cleaning the bathroom. you know, I live alone so all the chores in my house are what i have to do.
Sometimes cleaning toilet is weird a little.
2. I usually do exercise in the gym. That's the way how to digest the food that i've eaten.
3. When i feel sick, I go to the hospital and take a medicine and take a break enough.
4. I tend to have meals with chicken breast.
Because chicken breast has no lots of fat, so it can help my body condition.
1. A chore that I hate is cleaning the bathroom. You know, I live alone all the tasks in my house are something that I have to do.
Sometimes cleaning the toilet is a little weird.
2. I usually do exercise in the gym. That's the way how to digest the food that I've eaten.
3. When I feel sick, I go to the hospital and take medicine and take a break enough.
4. I tend to have meals with chicken breast because it doesn't contain much fat and can help my body's condition.
Very good sentences you have sent Steven! Well done! Impressive! Very good .However, your sentences are too SAFE. You just need to choose more complex words to give more strength to your answers. Apply synonyms to avoid redundancy. Avoid using 2 of the same words in one sentence or in a passage.
Corrections: Just be mindful of the usage of the ''I'' ,it should be capitalized without exemption. Capitalize the pronoun I.
Pronouns are words that replace nouns. I, you, and me are all examples of pronouns. While you and me are usually lowercase, the pronoun I should always be capitalized, regardless of where it appears in a sentence. All sentences should start with a capital letter.
RED -repeated words / reposition
BLUE- words to add/suggested words or synonyms
GREEN - connect or link the words together