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Most Memorable Things in 2021

A lot of things happened in Korea in 2021, and I would like to introduce 5 of them today.

First, The Squid Game was released on Netflix on September 17, 2021.

The squid game was loved by many countries around the world, and the squid game Pop-It, dolls, and games became popular.

Second, the Tokyo Olympics were held on July 23, 2021.

Korea had a lot of performances in the Tokyo Olympics, among them Kim Yeon-kyung, Kim Hee-jin, Yang Hyo-jin and Kim Su-ji in women's volleyball, and Kim Je-deok and Ansan in archery.

Third, BTS has become really famous.

BTS released a song called Butter on May 21, 2021, which topped the Billboard chart for 10 weeks in a row.

Fourth, Show Me The Money Swept Korea.

Show Me the Money is a survival program for rappers in Korea, where rappers made good songs and became popular. Among them, Bio's Limousine, Sokodomo's Carousel, and Mud the Student's Discord.

Last, a vaccine for the COVID-19 virus has been developed.

In 2019, there was a Corona 19 virus and many people were terrified. On February 24, 2021, a Corona 19 virus vaccine was developed and many people are vaccinated, and recently in Korea, 12 and 13 years old are vaccinated.


I hope that 2022 will be filled with only good things.

A lot of things happened in Korea in 2021, and I would like to introduce five of them today. First, The Squid Game was released on Netflix on September 17, 2021.The squid game was loved by many countries around the world, and the squid game, Pop-It, dolls, and games became popular. Second, the Tokyo Olympics will be held on July 23, 2021. Korea had a lot of performances in the Tokyo Olympics, among them Kim Yeon-kyung, Kim Hee-jin, Yang Hyo-jin, and Kim Su-ji in women's volleyball, and Kim Je-deok and Ansan in archery. Third, BTS has become really famous.BTS released a song called Butter on May 21, 2021, which topped the Billboard chart for 10 weeks in a row.Show Me The Money-Swept Korea, fourth.Show Me the Money was a survival program for rappers in Korea, where rappers made good songs and became popular. Among them: Bio's Limousine, Sokodomo's Carousel, and Mud the Student's Discord. Last, a vaccine for the COVID-19 virus has been developed.In 2019, there was a Corona 19 virus, and many people were terrified. On February 24, 2021, a Corona 19 virus vaccine was developed and many people were vaccinated. Most recently, in Korea, children as young as 12 and 13 years old were vaccinated. I hope that 2022 will be filled with only good things.I hope that 2022 will be filled with only good things.


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