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What you can learn from friendship.

Learning through friendship...
First, you can learn to understand and care for each other. It's hard to know how to be considerate and understanding each other if you have a relationship without meeting anyone. If you make friends, you can have a social life later and have a smooth relationship when you meet people.
Second, you can receive comfort different from the comfort you receive from your family. Family always gives me the most strength. However, if you have a friend in a special situation, you can sympathize and feel more. If you are in the same class, you can sympathize and comfort me more when I have a hard time because of my teacher. And if you have any concerns you can't tell your family, tell your friends.
Friendship taught me a lot other than that. It teaches you things that you can't learn from books. Friendship is a relationship that has a lot to learn from each other. We can learn and feel a lot from each other. I should always try to be a friend who other friends can see and learn from me.

Learning through friendship...
First, you can learn to understand and care for each other. It's hard to know how to be considerate and understanding ( be empathetic to )each other if you have a relationship without meeting anyone. If you make friends, you can have a social life later and have a smooth relationship when you meet people.
Second, you can receive comfort different from the comfort ( ones ) you receive from your family. Family always gives me the most (utmost )strength. However, if you have a friend in a special situation, you can sympathize and feel more. If you are in the same class, you can sympathize ( show your concern ) and comfort me more (eventually) when I have (am having ) a hard time because of my teacher. And if you have any concerns you (that) can't tell your family, tell (share it to ) your friends.
Friendship taught me a lot other than that. It teaches you things that you can't learn from books. Friendship is a relationship that has a lot to learn from each other. We can learn (assimilate) and feel a lot from each other. I should always try to be a friend who (whom) other friends can see and learn from me.



Very good Inah your sentence structures were awesome. Just be mindful of using repetitions or redundancy in some words and try to use alternatives by applying synonyms with the word :understand, comfort ,sympathize ,learn and more.

ut·most- shows more intensity Inah than ''most''
/ˈətˌmōst/
 
adjective
  1. most extreme; greatest.
    "a matter of the utmost importance"
    Similar:
    greatest
     
    maximum
     
    greatest possible
    highest
     
    most
     
    most extreme
    greatest amount of
    uttermost
     
    maximal
     
    extreme
     
    supreme
     
    paramount
     
    superlative
     
    enormous
     
    major
     
    Opposite:
    least possible
    very little
     
noun
  1. the greatest or most extreme extent or amount.
    "a plot that stretches credulity to the utmost"
    Similar:
    best
     
    uttermost
     
    hardest
     
    maximum

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