I think marriage is important. This is because I don't have to spend the rest of my life lonely, and it's very helpful to have someone I love when I'm in need. Of course, you may not be able to meet your spouse well, but when you meet a good spouse, you can rely on each other when you have a hard time and sometimes it is hard, but if you rely on each other, you will be able to live happily as you get older. Some people don't like marriage. But I think it's better to rely on each other and love each other than to grow old alone. I hope to meet a spouse who takes care of him when he is sick, rejoices when he is happy, and grieves when he is sad.
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I think marriage is important. The reason for this is that I don't have to spend the rest of my life lonely, and it's very reliable to have someone I love when I'm in need. Of course, you may not be able to meet your spouse well, but when you meet a good spouse, you can rely on each other when you have a hard time, and sometimes it is hard, but if you rely on each other, you will be able to live happy as you get older. Some people don't like marriage. But I think it's better to rely on each other and love each other than to grow old alone. I hope to meet a spouse who takes care of him when he is sick, rejoices when he is happy and grieves when he is sad.
There you go.Keep up the good work Inah.Congratualtions!
