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HI~ Venice :-) Happy Friday!

What awesome! Tomorrow is already Saturday ㅜㅜ
Time is so fast and I feel that I'm going on aging.
Yesterday, I suddenly decided to enroll the gym.
I went to the gym after I had dinner. I got a coupon for trial membership in the gym.
I was originally scheduled to buy membership for 3 months. But I thought carefully and then I got trial membership for one day.
I wanna participate in Spinning program. Spinning is exercise to using cycle while listennig exciting music.
during Almost 1 hour, I rode cycle. I was completely exhausted.. Of course it helped my calories burned.. but I might choose other program. There are my exercising programs some like Yoga, Dance, Pilates. Maybe, I will choose some of them ㅎㅎ

I'm visiting my cousin's husband in hospital. I will leave my home around 3:00 pm. It takes 2hours 30 minutes to get there.
I will travel far away from my home. Although my cousin's husband don't sill come to his sense, I hope my cousin never lose heart. So, I will get the phone call in hospital. I'll talk to you in a moment. Bye^^

HI~ Venice :-) Happy Friday!

What awesome! Tomorrow is already Saturday ㅜㅜ
Time is so fast and I feel that I'm going on aging.
Yesterday, I suddenly decided to enroll the gym.
I went to the gym after I had dinner. I got a coupon for trial membership in the gym.
I was originally scheduled to buy membership for 3 months. But I thought carefully and then I got trial membership for one day.
I wanna participate in Spinning program. Spinning is exercise to using cycle while listennig exciting music.
during Almost 1 hour, I rode cycle. I was completely exhausted.. Of course it helped my calories burned.. but I might choose other program. There are my exercising programs some like Yoga, Dance, Pilates. Maybe, I will choose some of them ㅎㅎ

I'm visiting my cousin's husband in hospital. I will leave my home around 3:00 pm. It takes 2hours 30 minutes to get there.
I will travel far away from my home. Although my cousin's husband don't sill come to his sense, I hope my cousin never lose heart. So, I will get the phone call in hospital. I'll talk to you in a moment. Bye^^


HI~ Venice :-) Happy Friday!

(What) It’s awesome! Tomorrow is already Saturday
ㅜㅜ
Time is so fast and I feel that I'm (going on aging) getting older.
Yesterday, I suddenly decided to enroll in the gym.
I went to the gym after (I had) eating dinner. I got a coupon for trial membership in the gym.
I was originally scheduled to buy membership for 3 months. But I thought about it carefully and then I got trial membership for one day.
I want to participate in the Spinning program. (Spinning) It is an exercise (to) using the cycle while listening to an exciting music.
(during A) For almost one hour, I rode the cycle. I was completely exhausted. Of course it helped my calories burned, but I might choose other program. There are (my) many exercising programs and some of them are like Yoga, Dance, and Pilates. Maybe, I will choose some of them
ㅎㅎ

I'm visiting my cousin's husband in the hospital. I will leave my home at around 3:00 pm. It takes two hours and 30 minutes to get there.
I will travel far away from my home. Although my cousin's husband still hasn’t (don't sill) come to his sense, I hope my cousin will never lose (heart) hope. So, I will get the phone call in hospital. I'll talk to you in a moment. Bye^^


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