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Some people say it can make the serious problems that living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language. In my honest opinion, however, the problems from language are not serious. Almost serious problems occur from cultural things.

Let’s image the situation. There are people who can’t speak a foreign language and they are in foreign country. They would like to order or explain something. In this case, they can use the guide book for foreign or translation. It will be uncomfortable but not be problem and if they learn the foreign language, it will be solved. Here is another situation. They are doing the action which is not allowed in this country. This action can make countrymen angry or occurs the problem. The foreigners may also not understand what happen and what is the problem. cultural is sensitive. So it would be hard to understand and accept to foreign. In this case, it takes lots of time and energy to understand each other.

In a conclusion, not being able to speak foreign language causes communication problems. Even if we use same language, there can be problem due to communication. This means we can fix this problem anyhow. But if we want to live another country where we cannot speak their language, we must try to accept their culture and learn the language so that we can settle this country well.

Some people say it can make serious problems if you're living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language. In my honest opinion, the problems with language are not that serious. Almost serious problems occur from cultural things.
 
Let’s imagine the situation where there are people who can’t speak a foreign language and they are in a foreign country. They would like to order or explain something. In this case, they can use the guidebook for foreigners or use a translation app that can help them. It will be uncomfortable, but it won't be a problem and if they learn the foreign language easily, it will be solved. Here is another situation, they are doing an action that is not allowed in a particular country. This action can make people angry or occurs a problem. The foreigners may also not understand what could have happened and what is the problem. The culture can be sensitive. So it would be hard to understand and accept by a foreign. In this case, it takes lots of time and energy to understand each other.
 
In a conclusion, not being able to speak a foreign language causes communication problems. Even if we use the same language, there can be problems due to communication. This means we can fix this problem anyhow. But if we want to live in another country where we cannot speak their language, we must try to accept their culture and learn the language so that we can settle in this country well.

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