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what is your weakness point?

as far as my weakness is concerned, i can say i'm a perfectionist.
when i start something new, i am so immersed in it until i'm satisfied with that.
i give a lot of attention to every details which might happen later.
this could be a strength in many roles however i could be a problem in certain too.
such as it could cause to bother my coworkers and myself and take a little time more.
we're selling waulut cake at coffee raseo cafe now.
when we start it first, i wanted it to be perfect.
so i revised again and again to make sure that there is no mistake.
as i have lots of experiences, i realize there's no perfection and i can modify it little by little while i'm doing that.
i made up my mind easier than before try to give myself a deadline to ensure that the work is done on time without compromising on quality.
the results also comes out better.

as far as my weakness is concerned, i can say i'm a perfectionist.
when i start something new, i am so immersed in it until i'm satisfied with that.
i give a lot of attention to every details which might happen later.
this could be a strength in many roles however i could be a problem in certain too.
such as it could cause to bother my coworkers and myself and take a little time more.
we're selling waulut cake at coffee raseo cafe now.
when we start it first, i wanted it to be perfect.
so i revised again and again to make sure that there is no mistake.
as i have lots of experiences, i realize there's no perfection and i can modify it little by little while i'm doing that.
i made up my mind easier than before try to give myself a deadline to ensure that the work is done on time without compromising on quality.
the results also comes out better.

 

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as far as my weakness is concerned, I can say I'm a perfectionist.
when I start something new, I am so immersed in it until I'm satisfied with that.
I give a lot of attention to every detail which might happen later.
this could be a strength in many roles however I could be a problem in certain too.
such as it could cause to bother my coworkers and me and take a little time more.
we're selling walnut cake at coffee ratio cafe now.
when we start it first, I wanted it to be perfect.
so I revised, again and again, to make sure that there is no mistake.
as I have lots of experiences, I realize there's no perfection and I can modify it little by little while I'm doing that.
I made up my mind easier than before try to give myself a deadline to ensure that the work is done on time without compromising on quality.
the results also come out better.

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