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and i've also worked as a stenographer for about a year.
one of my responsibility is to make sure that my students understand the class with my transferring.
i was able to experience how to interact with the deaf and learn what the real interaction is.
there are a lot of unexpected situation during the class but i can manage that well with staying calm.
because i'm perfectly prepared about what i have to do.
and i was able to be promoted in a short period of time ever at our company.
i believe these are the skills that i have plan to good use if i'm giving the opportunity to work with your airline.
I'm very sure that I can do this position better than anyone else.
thank you for listening.

do you think it's too long?,,
i made the answer 1+2 all.
but it's too long so it couldn't upload.
so i separated it.

and i've also worked as a stenographer for about a year.
one of my responsibility is to make sure that my students understand the class with my transferring.
i was able to experience how to interact with the deaf and learn what the real interaction is.
there are a lot of unexpected situation during the class but i can manage that well with staying calm.
because i'm perfectly prepared about what i have to do.
and i was able to be promoted in a short period of time ever at our company.
i believe these are the skills that i have plan to good use if i'm giving the opportunity to work with your airline.
I'm very sure that I can do this position better than anyone else.
thank you for listening.

do you think it's too long?,,
i made the answer 1+2 all.
but it's too long so it couldn't upload.
so i separated it.

 

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and I've also worked as a stenographer for about a year.
one of my responsibility is to make sure that my students understand the class with my transferring.
I was able to experience how to interact with the deaf and learn what real interaction is.
there is a lot of unexpected situation during the class but I can manage that well by staying calm.
because I'm perfectly prepared about what I have to do.
and I was able to be promoted in a short period of time ever at our company.
I believe these are the skills that I have a plan to good use if I'm given the opportunity to work with your airline.
I'm very sure that I can do this position better than anyone else.
thank you for listening.
 
do you think it's too long?
I made the answer 1+2 all.
but it's too long so it couldn't upload.
so I separated it.
 
Please wait for my corrections on your whole answer. I will make it shorter. :)

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