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HI~ Venice

Long time no see~ Venice^-^

First of all, I'm so sorry Lol. I could't answer your cell phone in yesterday because I was in ICU (intensive care unit).
My cousin's husband had a heart attack so he is critical condition. I worreid my cousin and her family.

Anyway, I am so sorry.
I put off my English class during last week. I was busy of helping my boyfriend preparing his moving.
You know, he went to Saipan to intern last Wednesday. he left Korea earlier than expected.
as soon as he finished VISA interview, his depart date was decided. So he didn't enough time to prepare USIM, clothes, shoes and so on. So I have to put off my class. and then I had a lot appointment whih my ex-coworkers.

So, as these reasons, I put off my class. I think I don't speak well these reason I put off and didn't get the cell phone, so I write this letter. See you in a mo! Bye~^^

Long time no see~ Venice^-^

First of all, I'm so sorry Lol. I could't answer your cell phone in yesterday because I was in ICU (intensive care unit).
My cousin's husband had a heart attack so he is critical condition. I worreid my cousin and her family.

Anyway, I am so sorry.
I put off my English class during last week. I was busy of helping my boyfriend preparing his moving.
You know, he went to Saipan to intern last Wednesday. he left Korea earlier than expected.
as soon as he finished VISA interview, his depart date was decided. So he didn't enough time to prepare USIM, clothes, shoes and so on. So I have to put off my class. and then I had a lot appointment whih my ex-coworkers.

So, as these reasons, I put off my class. I think I don't speak well these reason I put off and didn't get the cell phone, so I write this letter. See you in a mo! Bye~^^


Long time no see~ Venice^-^

First of all, I'm so sorry Lol. I couldn't answer (your) my cell phone (in) yesterday because I was in the ICU (Intensive Care Unit).
My cousin's husband had a heart attack (so) and he was in a critical condition. I am worried about my cousin and to her family.

Anyway, I am so sorry.
I (put off) postponed my English class (during) last week. I was busy (of) helping my boyfriend preparing for his (moving) trip.
As you knew, he went to Saipan (to) for internship last Wednesday. He left Korea earlier than expected.
As soon as he finished his VISA interview, his departure date was decided. So he didn't have enough time to prepare for USIM, clothes, shoes and so on. (So) That was why I have to put off my class. (and then) I also had a lot of appointments with my ex-coworkers.

So, (as) because of these reasons, I put off my class. (I think I don't speak well these reason I put off and didn't get the cell phone, so I write this letter.) -> I think I wouldn’t be able to explain these reasons to you on phone, so I just wrote this letter. See you in a moment! Bye~^^


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