My mommy is gentle. But sometimes she is angry at me. When mommy is angry, I am so scared. Because my mommy will shout at me. But when mommy is not angry, she is so gentle. so, mommy give me some snacks and toy！
She will said " Good job！" or " Great！" very much！ I like gentle mommy. And very important thing！. I like my mom. She is beautiful and she makes me happy. ( sometimes, she makes me angry....)Also, I like my family.
Mom
My mommy is gentle. But sometimes she is angry at me. When mommy is angry, I am so scared. Because my mommy will shout at me. But when mommy is not angry, she is so gentle. so, mommy give me some snacks and toy！
She will said " Good job！" or " Great！" very much！ I like gentle mommy. And very important thing！. I like my mom. She is beautiful and she makes me happy. ( sometimes, she makes me angry....)Also, I like my family.
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Mom
My mommy is gentle but she sometimes gets angry at me.
When my mommy is angry, I feel so scared because she shout sat me.
But when mommy is not angry, she is so gentle! She gives me some snacks and toys！
She will say " Good job！" or " Great！" Very good！
I like my gentle mommy!
The most important thing I like about my mom is her beauty and she makes me happy. ( though sometimes she also makes me angry)
I like my family!
