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Today, I want to talk about the investment in stocks. As for my experience in stocks, I have been invested in stocks for several years. When I was in my 20s,I was working, and managed my assets on my own. Back then remeber, I used to hedge my bets into stocks and saved money with deposits and installment savings.
I really liked those days. It's because I can manage my money freely and I have a lot of money saved up.
But after marriage, our family had to live on my husband's salary, and after paying for children's education, purchase of goods and management expenses ect,I had little money left and little money to save. But these days, my husband's salary has risen and I have a part-time job, so I am putting in a certain amount of stock investment and installment savings every month again.You know, I never hope for a windfall through the stocks. I lost and made money from stocks but the amount is not too much,because I am not overly greedy. But unlike me, my husband did something big no-no, he took out loans beyond his means to invest in stocks without any discussion. I was shocked and really mad at him, we argued each other several days, but eventually he earned a lot of money from that stock. Because he's a very cautious person, so before he took the plunge, he've always researched several companies he is interested in about their capital strenth, growth potential,anual profits... So what I want to say is if someone willing to build up investment know-how, and have self-control in investing, stocks can be a good means of increasing assets.

Today, I want to talk about investment in stocks. I have been investing in stocks for several years now. When I was in my 20s, I was working and managing my assets on my own. Back then, I hedged my bets into stocks and saved money with deposits and installment savings.

I liked those days because I could manage my money freely and save a lot of money.

But after marriage, our family had to live on my husband's salary. After paying for children's education, purchasing goods, and management expenses, etc., I had little money left to save. These days, my husband's salary has risen, and I have a part-time job, so I am putting in a certain amount of stock investment and installment savings every month again. I never hope for a windfall through the stocks (because.. add a reason here). I lost and made money from stocks, but I am not overly greedy because it isn't too much. But unlike me, my husband did something not good; he took out loans beyond his means to invest in stocks without discussing it with me. I was shocked and furious at him, we argued with each other for several days, but eventually, he earned a lot of money from that stock.  Before he took the plunge, he'd always research several companies he is interested in about their capital strength, growth potential, annual profits because he's a very cautious person. In my opinion, if someone is willing to build up investment and have self-control in investing, stocks can be a reasonable means of increasing assets.


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