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What kind of mom is a good mom?

I've always wondered that topic in my mind.
You know, I have two kids. One of them, my first son, is going to enter the elementary school next year.
Time flies so fast.
So I had to prepare something educational such as Korean, English, math, reading.. for my son. Whenever I teach him those subjects, we always used to argue or happen something unpleasant. When I faced with that situation,I considered not let him study, just let him go school without any knowledge.
But that's not how moms feel. I've always worried if my child goes to school without any preparation, there are many things he doesn't know in education that his self-esteem will fall.I've really worried about that. That's why it's not easy to give up those things.
I always wonder if it's right to let my child play phone games and watch TV all day long and give him free, or if it's right to force him to study and have friction that he doesn't want to do as he does now. I really want to be happy my son every day and want to give him big hug and smile, but in reality, I often get angry with him, and feel depressed when I listen to his annoyance. What kind of mother should I have to be?

Todays's diary was about my worries.

What kind of mom is a good mom?

I've always wondered that topic in my mind.
You know, I have two kids. One of them, my first son, is going to enter the elementary school next year.
Time flies so fast.
So I had to prepare something educational such as Korean, English, math, reading.. for my son. Whenever I teach him those subjects, we always used to argue or happen something unpleasant. When I faced with that situation,I considered not let him study, just let him go school without any knowledge.
But that's not how moms feel. I've always worried if my child goes to school without any preparation, there are many things he doesn't know in education that his self-esteem will fall.I've really worried about that. That's why it's not easy to give up those things.
I always wonder if it's right to let my child play phone games and watch TV all day long and give him free, or if it's right to force him to study and have friction that he doesn't want to do as he does now. I really want to be happy my son every day and want to give him big hug and smile, but in reality, I often get angry with him, and feel depressed when I listen to his annoyance. What kind of mother should I have to be?

Todays's diary was about my worries.


Revised:

What kind of mom is a good mom?
 
I've always wondered about that topic in my mind.
You know, I have two kids. One of them, my first son, is going to enter elementary school next year.
Time flies so fast.
So I had to prepare something educational such as Korean, English, math, reading for my son. Whenever I teach him those subjects, we always used to argue or happen something unpleasant. When I faced that situation, I considered not letting him study, just letting him go to school without knowledge.
But that's not how moms feel. I've always worried if my child goes to school without any preparation, there are many things he doesn't know in education that his self-esteem will fall. I've worried about that. That's why it's not easy to give up those things.
I always wonder if it's right to let my child play phone games and watch TV all day long and give him free, or if it's right to force him to study and have friction that he doesn't want to do as he does now. I want to be happy with my son every day and give him a big hug and smile, but in reality, I often get angry with him and feel depressed when I listen to his annoyance. What kind of mother should I have to be?
 
Today's diary was about my worries.

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