dinosaur

Dinosaur

Hello~ everyone. My favorite dinosaur is T-Rex. Because T-Rex has a giant mouth. It is very cool. T-Rex is the king of the dino.
Because it has a strong leg. So It can catch other dinosaurs.
Also, It has a giant teeth. So when did It bite other dino, other dino can`t run away. And T-Rex is smart and strong. So T-Rex is the king of the dinosaur. what is your favorite dinosaur?

Dinosaur

Hello, everyone! My favorite dinosaur is T-Rex. Because T-Rex has a giant mouth. It is very cool. T-Rex is the king of dinos.
Because it has a strong leg. It can catch other dinosaurs.
Also, it has giant teeth. So when it bites other dinos, they can`t run away. And T-Rex is smart and strong. That's why it is the king of the dinosaurs. What is your favorite dinosaur?

 

Note: Hello, dear! I did some corrections with your work. Such as adding "s" on verbs that are referring to one noun. As well as adding some words needed to make it clear. Please remember that we capitalize the first letter of the word if it's a proper name or if the word is at the beginning of the sentence. Keep up the good work, dear.