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It's been rainy for 5 days in a row. I am fond with cloudy weather but I miss the sunny day now.

Today, a bulb in the bathroom was blinking and all of a sudden, It's gone. the last thing I want to do is to leave something in dead in my place as such clocks with dead batteries so on. I tried to take it out from the body and find the size of the bulb. It wasn't easy and straightforward as it was stuck to and hung on body highly.

Finally, I took it away and found out the size of it but it wasn't a regualr bulb. Shape of it is familiar to me but the pins on it were rare to me. I went out to the Homedepot where sells all kind of the stuff regarding housing and gardening matters.

I asked a staff that I was looking for the bulb but he was saying there was no one here cause it was kind of oldish style so they no longer deal with it.

When it comes to standards in Canada, Sometimes I am embarrassed with different measurement and standards for the products such as square meter and feet across the board. I dosen't come to mind right away when I see it but I am getting used to it. I went back home with out of nothing and looked up Amazon. I found out the same standard with the previous one. I hope that It would fit well.

It's been raining for 5 days in a row. I am fond of cloudy weather, but I miss the sunny day now.
 
Today, a bulb in the bathroom was blinking and all of a sudden, It's gone. the last thing I want to do is to leave something dead in my place as such clocks with dead batteries so on. I tried to take it out from the body and find the size of the bulb. It wasn't easy and straightforward as it was stuck to and hung on body highly.
 
Finally, I took it away and found out the size of it but it wasn't a regular bulb. The shape of it is familiar to me but the pins on it were rare to me. I went out to the Homedepot where sells all kinds of stuff regarding housing and gardening matters.
 
I asked a staff that I was looking for the bulb but he was saying there was no one here cause it was kind of oldish style so they no longer deal with it.
 
When it comes to standards in Canada, Sometimes I am embarrassed with different measurements and standards for the products such as square meters and feet across the board. It comes to mind right away when I see it but I am getting used to it. I went back home without anything and looked up Amazon. I found out the same standard as the previous one. I hope that It would fit well.
 
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It's been raining for 5 days in a row. I am fond of cloudy weather, but I miss the sunny days now.
 
Today, a bulb in the bathroom was flickering and all of a sudden, it's gone. The last thing I want to do is to leave something dead in my place as such clocks with dead batteries so on. I tried to take it out from the body and find the size of the bulb. It wasn't easy and straightforward as it was stuck to and hung on body highly.
 
Finally, I took it away and found out the size of it but it wasn't a regular bulb. The shape of it is familiar to me but the pins on it were unfamiliar to me. I went out to the Homedepot where the sell all kinds of stuff regarding housing and gardening matters.
 
I asked a staff that I was looking for the bulb but he was said there was no one here cause it was kind of oldish style so they no longer deal with it.
 
When it comes to standards in Canada, sometimes I am embarrassed with different measurements and standards for the products such as square meters and feet across the board. It comes to mind right away when I see it but I am getting used to it. I went back home without anything and looked up Amazon. I found out the same standard as the previous one. I hope that It would fit well.

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