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We had a wrap-up party after our athletic meet.
We roasted the pork and chicken and beef.
We had meats with many kind of alcohol.
We drunk alcohol. and then we sang a song in karaoke from 9:00 to 12:00
Some people was good dancer. some people like a B-boy
I was very tired after listening many songs.
I went to my room in the pension. But some people sang to 3 AM.
Saturday morning we went to Namiseom Island.
Namiseon Island is famous as location for many TV drama series.
We came Namiseon Island with boat.
And we ride a bicycle in the island. I felt cool breeze and watched beautiful landscape.
and I took many picture with co-worker.
at last we came back home.
It's troublesome to go. But I'll keep it as a good memory.

We had a wrap-up party after our athletic meet.
We roasted the pork and chicken and beef.
We had meats with many kind of alcohol.
We drunk alcohol. and then we sang a song in karaoke from 9:00 to 12:00
Some people was good dancer. some people like a B-boy
I was very tired after listening many songs.
I went to my room in the pension. But some people sang to 3 AM.
Saturday morning we went to Namiseom Island.
Namiseon Island is famous as location for many TV drama series.
We came Namiseon Island with boat.
And we ride a bicycle in the island. I felt cool breeze and watched beautiful landscape.
and I took many picture with co-worker.
at last we came back home.
It's troublesome to go. But I'll keep it as a good memory.


We had a wrap-up party after our athletic meet.
We roasted the pork, (and) chicken and beef.
We had meats with many kinds of alcohol.
We drank (alcohol) liquor, and then we sang (a) songs in the karaoke from 9:00 to 12:00.
Some people (was) were good dancers and they danced B-Boy. (some people like a B-boy)
I was very tired after listening to many songs.
I went to my room in the pension. But some people sang (to) up until 3 AM.
(Saturday morning) We went to Namiseom Island on Saturday morning.
(Namiseon Island) It is famous as location for many TV drama series.
We (came Namiseon Island with) went there by boat.
And we rode a bicycle in the island. I felt the cool breeze and watched the beautiful landscape.
(and) I took many pictures with my co-worker.
At last we came back home.
It was troublesome to go there. But I'll keep it as a good memory.


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