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I said i went to the workshop in last Friday.
we rode a car dividedly
we go through boring process in the car.
we went to restaurant as soon as we arrived Chuncheon.
we ate Korean Mak noodle and boiled pork.
It was very good.
and then we went to the resort pension where we will stay.
and then we started an athletic meet.
First,The man played foot volley ball.
We divided 2 teams
I am in A team. We have CEO in A team.
We come close to lose in foot volley ball, but we barely won.
And we played badminton. I participated in badminton.
But I have hardly ever play badminton.
I played very hard but It's difficult.
We have good player in badminton. we won in badminton.
Lastly we played dodge ball.
All member joined in the dodge ball.
Our team member all died in dodge ball after hitting ball.
But only one CEO keep alive in dodge ball.
No one of B team want to hit CEO.
Because CEO holds serious grudges.
Continuously B members turn the ball, and no one hit him.
finally someone hit him.
we lost in the dodge ball.
Looking at the whole, A team won.
We got present, money.

I said i went to the workshop in last Friday.
we rode a car dividedly
we go through boring process in the car.
we went to restaurant as soon as we arrived Chuncheon.
we ate Korean Mak noodle and boiled pork.
It was very good.
and then we went to the resort pension where we will stay.
and then we started an athletic meet.
First,The man played foot volley ball.
We divided 2 teams
I am in A team. We have CEO in A team.
We come close to lose in foot volley ball, but we barely won.
And we played badminton. I participated in badminton.
But I have hardly ever play badminton.
I played very hard but It's difficult.
We have good player in badminton. we won in badminton.
Lastly we played dodge ball.
All member joined in the dodge ball.
Our team member all died in dodge ball after hitting ball.
But only one CEO keep alive in dodge ball.
No one of B team want to hit CEO.
Because CEO holds serious grudges.
Continuously B members turn the ball, and no one hit him.
finally someone hit him.
we lost in the dodge ball.
Looking at the whole, A team won.
We got present, money.


I (said i) told you that I went to (thea workshop (in) last Friday.
We rode (a) in the cars dividedly.
We (go) went through a boring process in the car.
We went to a restaurant as soon as we arrived Chuncheon.
We ate Korean Mak noodle and boiled pork.
It was very good.
(and)
Then we went to the resort pension where we (will) stayed.
And then we started an athletic meet.
First, the men played foot volleyball.
We were divided into 2 teams
I am in A team. -> I was on team AWe have CEO in A team. -> The CEO was also in our team.
We come close to lose in foot volley ball, but we barely won. -> I thought we would lose the game, but we barely won.
And (we played) playing badminton, I participated in the badminton game.
But I have hardly ever played badminton.
I played very hard but It's difficult. -> I tried to play it well but it was difficult.
We have good players (in) for badminton. We won (in badminton) the match.
Lastly, we played dodge ball.
All members joined (in) the dodge ball game.
Our team member all died in dodge ball after hitting ball. -> Our team members were all eliminated after being hit by the ball.
But only one CEO keep alive in dodge ball. -> And the CEO was the only one left.
No one (of) from (B) team B wants to hit the CEO.
It is because (CEO) he holds serious grudges.
Continuously, (B) members from team B took turn passing the ball, and no one hit him.
finally someone hit him. -> Finally, someone did.
We lost (in) the (dodge ball) game.
Looking at the whole, A team won. -> Overall, team A won.
We got present, money. ->
We got money as our prize.


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