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Hello, I am pleased to meet you. First of all, thank you for this interview opportunity. My name is 윤선 남. Let me introduce myself in three ways.
First is my major. My major is folklore which studies the customs and cultures of other people. So, through my major, I can have positive and open attitude toward new culture and people. While I lived with team members in various environments and studied that region, I could develop adaptability and teamwork there. I think that this my ability help your company where it featured culture-cross relation and the speed of change is fast.
Second, it’s a lot of experiences. Among them, I could improve my communication skill in working at broadcasting station for 1 year. In addition, I could achieve humility in many competitions. Especially I could be great listener not just telling something. These abilities are the most important factor in 싸이버로지텍 that has many customers and team project.
If I am hired, I do my best for developing 싸이버로지텍 through my these ability.


My motto is that Failure is the mother of success! Based on this motto, first, I’m optimistic. I’m not afraid of failure and I try to learn something in failure. Second, I’m responsible. Because I have a strong mind to achieve my work of purpose, I have been a leader in various groups. Most of all, when I worked at broadcasting station, I received first price due to achieve my goals at first.

Hello, I’m pleased to meet you. First of all, I’d like to thank you for the opportunity to have this interview today. My name is… I majored in folklore that studies about the customs and cultures of different types of people. Through my major, I learned how to be positive and open-minded towards meeting new people and knowing their culture. I learned how to adapt to different environments, as well as how to do task with teamwork when (please indicate here the activity you made. Is it volunteering?). Through these abilities I think I could contribute to your company as it features culture-cross relation.

What sets me apart from other applicants is my experience in working at a broadcasting network for one year. In addition to that, I don’t just share opinions always, but I’m also a good listener and a good follower. Because I believe that a good leader must be a good follower first. I also believe in the saying “Failure is the mother of success!” in every mistake I made, I make sure to learn my lessons and of course next to that is doing the right thing. I consider myself as a responsible person because I’m always eager to achieve perfect outcome in every work I do. I’ve experienced to be a leader in various group activities, one of those is my experience when working at a broadcasting network. I received an award for being the first one to achieve the goal they set. Through my abilities and experiences, I am confident enough to be fit for the position I am applying for.


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