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Living in Jakarta

I've lived in Jakarta for 1 year and half so far. The life between Jakarta and Korea is quite different.

When I was in Korea, I was still student or job seeker so I couldn't do something that I want to try but only study, make a resume and prepare some job interview. I remember those stuffs were quite stressful to me. I always dreamed to go out of Korea.

At that time, It was not that important where I live. So I tried to find some job opportunity regardless of continent. I wanted to work at English speaking countries such as America, Australia, Europe and so on at first, but soon I realized that I wasn't prepared for it when it comes to work experience and language as well. So I decided to make a career in southern east Asia first because they are rapidly developing and I thought I could work using English. So I am working at Jakarta.

Jakarta was bigger city than I expected. Everything seemed so nice at first but soon Covid-19 broke out all over the world. My life in Indonesia started with Covid-19. That's why I haven't visit to Bali island yet, even though I have lived here for almost 1 year and half. What a pity life. I hope I could travel around Asian countries after the end of covid-19.

Living in Jakarta

I've lived in Jakarta for 1 year and half so far. The life between Jakarta and Korea is quite different.

When I was in Korea, I was still student or job seeker so I couldn't do something that I want to try but only study, make a resume and prepare some job interview. I remember those stuffs were quite stressful to me. I always dreamed to go out of Korea.

At that time, It was not that important where I live. So I tried to find some job opportunity regardless of continent. I wanted to work at English speaking countries such as America, Australia, Europe and so on at first, but soon I realized that I wasn't prepared for it when it comes to work experience and language as well. So I decided to make a career in southern east Asia first because they are rapidly developing and I thought I could work using English. So I am working at Jakarta.

Jakarta was bigger city than I expected. Everything seemed so nice at first but soon Covid-19 broke out all over the world. My life in Indonesia started with Covid-19. That's why I haven't visit to Bali island yet, even though I have lived here for almost 1 year and half. What a pity life. I hope I could travel around Asian countries after the end of covid-19.

 

 

CORRECTION:

Living in Jakarta

 

I've been living in Jakarta for a year and a half so far. Life between Jakarta and Korea is quite different.

 

When I was in Korea, I was still a student or job seeker so I couldn't do something that I want to try except to study, make a resume and prepare for some job interviews. I remember those kinds of stuff were quite stressful to me. I always dreamed to go out of Korea.

 

At that time, It was not that important where I live. So I tried to find some job opportunities regardless of continent. I wanted to work in English-speaking countries such as America, Australia, Europe, and so on at first, but soon I realized that I wasn't prepared for it when it comes to working experience and language as well. So I decided to make a career in southeast Asia first because they are rapidly developing and I thought I could work using English. So I am working in Jakarta.

 

Jakarta was a bigger city than I expected. Everything seemed so nice at first but soon Covid-19 broke out all over the world. My life in Indonesia started with Covid-19. That's why I haven't visited Bali island yet, even though I have been living here for almost a year and a half. What a pity life. I hope to travel around Asian countries after the end of covid-19.


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