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It's sunny today and 29 degree approximately. Today is little hot but I got told that Summer season will end soon. I am going to miss it.

Recently, I've exchanged my dyson purifier since it was making a high pitch noise. Yesterday it arrived and I wanted to connect it with my phone to control wherever I am. I've done it several times before so I knew how to do it. but this time I had a problem with connecting it. I struggled to do it but failed again and again. I could go the last part but it didn't go next. I checked everything I knew such as wifi connection, bluetooth mode and so on. It took more than an hour. It was little unstressing and started being tired.

That night, my friend recommended that I just let it go and try to forget about it then it will work well.

I've just tried it again and made it right away. I don't know what was the problem but it worked. Keeping in mind what he said, sometime I put so much my energy into out of nothing. I should let them go sometimes.

It's sunny today and 29 degree approximately. Today is little hot but I got told that Summer season will end soon. I am going to miss it.

Recently, I've exchanged my dyson purifier since it was making a high pitch noise. Yesterday it arrived and I wanted to connect it with my phone to control wherever I am. I've done it several times before so I knew how to do it. but this time I had a problem with connecting it. I struggled to do it but failed again and again. I could go the last part but it didn't go next. I checked everything I knew such as wifi connection, bluetooth mode and so on. It took more than an hour. It was little unstressing and started being tired.

That night, my friend recommended that I just let it go and try to forget about it then it will work well.

I've just tried it again and made it right away. I don't know what was the problem but it worked. Keeping in mind what he said, sometime I put so much my energy into out of nothing. I should let them go sometimes.

Correction:

It's sunny today. 29 degrees approximately. Today is a little hot but I got told that Summer season will end soon. I am going to miss it.

Recently, I've changed my dyson purifier since it was making a high pitch noise. Yesterday it arrived and I wanted to connect it with my phone to control it wherever I wamt. I've done it several times before so I know how to do it. But this time I had a problem connecting it. I struggled to do it and failed again and again. I have done the last part but it didn't go to the next. I checked everything I know such as wifi connection, bluetooth mode and so on. It took more than an hour. It was a little stressful and started being tired.

That night, my friend recommended that I just let it go and try to forget about it then it will work well.

I've just tried it again and made it right away. I don't know what was the problem but it worked. Keeping in mind what he said, sometimes I put so much my energy into nothing. I should let them go sometimes.


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