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It was cloudy and rainy from time to time in the morning but now it's sunny and hotter than yesterday. The weather changes so dramatically.

Last weekend, My wife and I went to Toronto premium outlet to shop cloths or other accessories for us.
I was really excited to coming there since it was first time and I got told many times that it is good place for shopping with reasonable price. She as well.

First impression was that I picked up a wrong day since there were so many customers. Even there wasn't so much space left to park my car. Luckily, We could park at the lot and started to shop. There were bunch of brands We liked but We had to line because only a few people were allowed to get in at the all time. So We had to wait until the other customers came out from a shop. That was little annoying the reason why I just wanted to take a look briefly at some stores but we needed to wait like for at least 20 minutes sometimes.

Eventually, the shopping took us so long time and also the price wasn't that much good considering that I heard but I found out a leather jacket for my wife which is from a designer and new arrivai.
A staff, she told that it might be on sale sooner or later, if I left my contact she would reach out me when it would be on marked down. I am really looking forward to buying it for my wife.

It was cloudy and rainy from time to time in the morning but now it's sunny and hotter than yesterday. The weather changes so dramatically.

Last weekend, My wife and I went to Toronto premium outlet to shop cloths or other accessories for us.
I was really excited to coming there since it was first time and I got told many times that it is good place for shopping with reasonable price. She as well.

First impression was that I picked up a wrong day since there were so many customers. Even there wasn't so much space left to park my car. Luckily, We could park at the lot and started to shop. There were bunch of brands We liked but We had to line because only a few people were allowed to get in at the all time. So We had to wait until the other customers came out from a shop. That was little annoying the reason why I just wanted to take a look briefly at some stores but we needed to wait like for at least 20 minutes sometimes.

Eventually, the shopping took us so long time and also the price wasn't that much good considering that I heard but I found out a leather jacket for my wife which is from a designer and new arrivai.
A staff, she told that it might be on sale sooner or later, if I left my contact she would reach out me when it would be on marked down. I am really looking forward to buying it for my wife.

Correction:

It was cloudy and rainy from time to time in the morning but now it's sunny and hotter than yesterday. The weather changes so dramatically.

Last weekend, My wife and I went to Toronto premium outlet to shop for clothes or other accessories.
I was really excited to go there since it was the first time and I got told many times that it is a good place for shopping with reasonable price. Same goes foe her.

First impression was that I picked up a wrong day since there were so many customers. There wasn't even so much space left to park my car. Luckily, we could park at the lot and started to shop. There were bunch of brands the we liked but we had to fall in line because only a few people were allowed to get in at a time. So we had to wait until the other customers came out from a shop. That was little annoying because I just wanted to take a look briefly at some stores but we needed to wait like for at least 20 minutes sometimes.

Eventually, the shopping took us so long and also the price wasn't that much good considering that I heard but I found out a leather jacket for my wife which is from a designer and new arrivai.
A staff told us that it might be on sale soon, If I left my contact she would reach out to me when it would be on marked down. I am really looking forward to buying it for my wife.


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