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3. I am tone-deaf. but I like to sing to relieve my stress.
4. Yes. I like. one of way to relieve my stress is eating.
5. Yes. I like to eat out. I enjoy trying new food. new restrants.
6. I don't a lot like to exercise but, I need to some exercise.
7. I play 단소. kind of 플롯. when I was elementary student, I learn it.
Danso is a traditional Korean woodwind instrument that is played vertically. Because the sound of the danso is clear but not loud, it is often played solo.
8. No, I don't. I am kind of scary of water. when I was young, my uncle taungt me swimmin but, I am hard to swim.
9. Yes. I do. I also play 고스톱. 고스톱 is Korean international card game.
10. I don't like to gamble. just I'm not interesting in this.
11. Yes. I love to watch the movies. I love all kind of genre movies except horrible movie. When I have enough time and money, I go to movie theather twice a week.
12. Yes, I like children and enjoy playing with them. My cousins is very young.
They are younger 15 years than me. When my relative got togather, I care for my cousins. we enjoyed our time.

3. I am tone-deaf. but I like to sing to relieve my stress.
4. Yes. I like. one of way to relieve my stress is eating.
5. Yes. I like to eat out. I enjoy trying new food. new restrants.
6. I don't a lot like to exercise but, I need to some exercise.
7. I play 단소. kind of 플롯. when I was elementary student, I learn it.
Danso is a traditional Korean woodwind instrument that is played vertically. Because the sound of the danso is clear but not loud, it is often played solo.
8. No, I don't. I am kind of scary of water. when I was young, my uncle taungt me swimmin but, I am hard to swim.
9. Yes. I do. I also play 고스톱. 고스톱 is Korean international card game.
10. I don't like to gamble. just I'm not interesting in this.
11. Yes. I love to watch the movies. I love all kind of genre movies except horrible movie. When I have enough time and money, I go to movie theather twice a week.
12. Yes, I like children and enjoy playing with them. My cousins is very young.
They are younger 15 years than me. When my relative got togather, I care for my cousins. we enjoyed our time.


3. I am tone-deaf but I like to sing to relieve my stress.
4. Yes, I (like) do. One (of) way to relieve my stress is eating.
5. Yes, I like to eat out. I enjoy trying new food at new restaurants.
6. I don't (a lot) like exercise but, I need to do some exercise.
7. I play
단소. It’s a kind of 플롯. When I was an elementary student, I learned it.
Danso is a traditional Korean woodwind instrument that is played vertically. Because the sound of the danso is clear but not loud, it is often played solo.
8. No, I don't. I am kind of (scary) scared of water. When I was young, my uncle taught me how to swim but, I am hard to swim.
9. Yes. I do. I also play
고스톱. 고스톱. It is a Korean international card game.
10. I don't like to gamble. (just) I'm not just interested in this.
11. Yes. I love to watch (the) movies. I love all (kind of) genres of movies except for horrible movie. When I have enough time and money, I go to the movie theater twice a week.
12. Yes, I like children and enjoy playing with them. My cousins are very young.
They are (younger) 15 years younger than me. When my relatives get together, I take care (for) of my cousins. We enjoy our time.


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