And this week, there will be open the party about the our company's IPO.
That'll be celebrate this Friday.
We'll eat pizza(just..?) in the meeting room.
And then these day, COVID-19 is very serious.
That's why I can't have any meet promise with my friends.
But yesterday, I started game on steam, 'Sun Haven' looks like a 'Stardewvally'.
My boyfriend said, "It will be fun to our." So I played with him this game in english.(Only English version.)
I thought learn english throught out this game.
That's all!
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Hello Ellie this is a nice composition of yours. Here are some corrections that might help.
Nowadays, I am working in a company. They will open a party about our company's IPO this week, that will be celebrateds this coming Friday. We are going to eat pizza in the meeting room.
But these days, COVIID-19 is very serious that's why I cannot promise my friends to meet them and eat outside. Yesterday, I started to play a game Sun Haven looks like a Stardewvally, My boyfriend said "It will be fun to us" So we play a game that is English, I learn English words in that game. That's all
When you are going to write an essay, try to write in a full sentences don't cut some words. But this is a good start, make it simple and base on your own experience when you are going to write an essay! Thankyou Ellie have a nice day
