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I don't like workshop
But i have to go workshop in this weekend for a day and a half.
We travel in Chuncheon city.
There are many river and mountain in Chunchen.
I don't like to spend my time for workshop in Saturday.
Saturday is originally my day off holiday.
I want to get my time in Saturday.
We have to do The athletics competition in the workshop.
I don't play badminton and dodge ball well.
I couldn't enjoy the time.
And Some people press a drink on in night
I like to drink. but i don't like to press a drink on by someone.
I feel inconvenient to sleep outside not my home.
Sleeping outside make me irritate my nerves.
Of course there are good things.
I think i can to became familiar with coworker.
But many people don'y like workshop.
i also don't like.

I don't like workshop
But i have to go workshop in this weekend for a day and a half.
We travel in Chuncheon city.
There are many river and mountain in Chunchen.
I don't like to spend my time for workshop in Saturday.
Saturday is originally my day off holiday.
I want to get my time in Saturday.
We have to do The athletics competition in the workshop.
I don't play badminton and dodge ball well.
I couldn't enjoy the time.
And Some people press a drink on in night
I like to drink. but i don't like to press a drink on by someone.
I feel inconvenient to sleep outside not my home.
Sleeping outside make me irritate my nerves.
Of course there are good things.
I think i can to became familiar with coworker.
But many people don'y like workshop.
i also don't like.


I don't like workshops.
But I have to (go) attend a workshop (in) this weekend for a day and a half.
We will travel (in) to Chuncheon city.
There are many rivers and mountains in Chunchen.
I don't like to spend my time for workshop on Saturday.
Saturday is originally my day off (holiday).
I want to get my time on Saturday.
We have to do the athletics competition in the workshop.
I don't play badminton and dodge ball well.
I couldn't enjoy the time.
And some people press a drink on (in) at night.
I like to drink. But I don't like to press a drink on by someone.
I feel inconvenient to sleep outside (not) my home.
Sleeping outside makes me irritated (my nerves).
Of course there are still good things about it.
I think I can (to) become familiar with my co-workers.
But many people don't like workshops.
i also don't like.> I’m one of them.


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