There's many students that don't know about serious problems of animals. So it can be very useful for students
Second, zoos save species from exction and other dangers.
There's many animals that in danger. and the must get medicine and other meals.
Third, zoos can be helpful scientific research. You can think this opnion is not good. But we can help more animals for researching.
First, zoos educate the public about animals and conservation efforts.
There's many students that don't know about serious problems of animals. So it can be very useful for students
Second, zoos save species from exction and other dangers.
There's many animals that in danger. and the must get medicine and other meals.
Third, zoos can be helpful scientific research. You can think this opnion is not good. But we can help more animals for researching.
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"Of course, we need zoos for animals".
First, zoos educate the public about animals and conservation efforts.
There's many
There are many ...
students that don't know about serious problems of animals.
So it can be very useful for INFORMATIVE TO students
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Second, zoos save species from exction and other dangers.
There's many animals that ARE in danger. and theY must get medicine and other meals.
Third, zoos can be helpful TO/FOR scientific research. You can tMAY / MIGHT think this opnion is not good. But we can help more animals for researching.
