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Why school uniforms are not good

I think school uniforms are not good.
If students were to wear the same clothes as everyone else, they would lose their identity, individualism, and self-expression.
People express themselves through their clothing choices.
It is through clothes that people can show their creativity and their unique self while showing who they are.
Paying for uniforms is unfair.
Because public schools are free, so they should not buy uniforms, and they are too expensive.
Some families can't pay this much money for clothes.
Some people say that school uniforms get better grades when wear them.
But they are just pieces of clothing, and how can they get better grades in school?
What is the difference if you wear or don't wear certain kinds if clothes?
That's it for my opinion.

What is you opinion?

I think wearing school uniforms is not good. If students were to wear the same clothes as everyone else, they would lose their  sense of identity, uniqueness, and self-expression. People express themselves through their  preferred clothing . It is through clothes that people can show their creativity and their uniqueness  while showing who they are. It is free to go to public schools so we shouldn't buy uniforms because they are too expensive. Paying for uniforms is unfair. Some families can't pay this much money for clothes. Some people say that school uniforms get better grades when wearing them. But they are just pieces of clothing, how can we get better grades in school by wearing that? What is the difference if you wear or don't wear certain kinds of clothes? Can you tell me? Well, thats my opinion. How about you? 


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