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My will(2)

I feel something warm from my left arm. When saw this slowly... my arm was cut.
I lost all my strength. People came and scream.
I thought 'I already cut, so I'll die eventually.' The only one thought caught my mind.
I raised my falling body and grabbed a broken sword with my right arm.
I ran directly to the monster and stab his shoulder. People were watching me with surprised faces.
I dragged the monster to the inside of the elevator. And I stabbed him several times.
I finally succeed knock him down, but he trying to get out.
I think there is only one way to finish this.


"Throw!"

People were crying. Since the world changed like that, we collaborated together. Although it's been few days, they are my family. He hesitated to throw the Molotov cocktail. Eunhyuk grabbed it and threw it.
My body started to catch fire. Suddenly a person went through my head. It was Jisu.

'Jisu... may you be happy'

I feel something warm from my left arm. When saw this slowly... my arm was cut.
I lost all my strength. People came and scream.
I thought 'I have already cut, so I'll die eventually.' The only one thought caught my mind.
I raised my falling body and grabbed a broken sword with my right arm.
I ran directly to the monster and stab his shoulder. People were watching me with surprised faces.
I dragged the monster to the inside of the elevator. And I stabbed him several times.
I finally succeed knock him down, but he is trying to get out.
I think there is only one way to finish this.


"Throw!"

People were crying. Since the world has changed like that, we collaborated together. Although it's been few days, they are my famiies. He hesitated to throw the Molotov cocktail. Eunhyuk grabbed it and threw it.
My body started to catch fire. Suddenly a person went through my head. It was Jisu.

'Jisu... may you be happy'


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