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[Siren's ringing]

The siren is ringing.
It sounds like the monster appears on the first floor.
She has just finished her appendix surgery, and right sitting behind me.
I have to go now, but if I leave now, it feels like won't see her again.
"Uh... Jisu?"
"Yeah?"
"I think it's crazy to say this in a situation like that... I like you."
"Is that God's will, too?
"No, that is my will"
After say that I directly running to the place where the sounds coming from.
Oh, no. That is the security guard. The security...I mean monster was holding the lawnmower high. That horrible mower was direct to ma'am.

[A clash of the sword]

I managed to stop the grasshopper. He was actually quite heavy. My injured right arm began to throb.
The grasshopper hit the ceiling of the building and these collisions made sparks.

When I thought I'd fall off the side and attack again...

'Ping!'

[Siren's ringing]

The siren is ringing.
It sounds like the monster appears on the first floor.
She has just finished her appendix surgery, and right sitting behind me.
I have to go now, but if I leave now, it feels like won't see her again.
"Uh... Jisu?"
"Yeah?"
"I think it's crazy to say this in a situation like that... I like you."
"Is that God's will, too?
"No, that is my will"
After saying that I directly run to the place where the sounds coming from.
Oh, no. That is the security guard. The security...I mean monster was holding the lawnmower high. That horrible mower was direct to ma'am.

[A clash of the sword]

I managed to stop the grasshopper. He was quite heavy. My right arm was injured and began to throb.
The grasshopper hit the ceiling of the building and these collisions made sparks.

When I thought I'd fall off the side and attack again...

'Ping!'


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