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Some people says a different language disturb communication of different nationalities so it will be better having one language in the world.
If we only consider an aspect of communication, unified language would be effective for it. People do not have to learn another language and worry about misunderstanding from different use of similar words.
However, if we deicide one specific language to use everywhere, that work should go through very careful steps to put together world. It is because every language has its own reason to exist.

At first, we did not share same culture so have different custom. I think every language reflect the nation’s culture. For example, Korean usually too much cares of others’ feeling so they avoid speaking directly. This reflects their language to have diverse vocabularies of same meaning to use it properly according to situations and counterpart. On the contrary, some countries like to mention directly without any misapprehension so they do not need several words to explain something.

Secondly, the whole world was divided into a number of countries. Every independent country has their own issues which do not want to share with other countries, so maybe I guess a great deal of secret codes would appear to hide it. It seems like using different languages.

There is no doubt about the convenience in assumption having a same language all over the world, but we need to consider the culture difference and the fact that sometimes it will be better having own language each countries.

Some people says a different language disturb communication of different nationalities so it will be better having one language in the world.
If we only consider an aspect of communication, unified language would be effective for it. People do not have to learn another language and worry about misunderstanding from different use of similar words.
However, if we deicide one specific language to use everywhere, that work should go through very careful steps to put together world. It is because every language has its own reason to exist.

At first, we did not share same culture so have different custom. I think every language reflect the nation’s culture. For example, Korean usually too much cares of others’ feeling so they avoid speaking directly. This reflects their language to have diverse vocabularies of same meaning to use it properly according to situations and counterpart. On the contrary, some countries like to mention directly without any misapprehension so they do not need several words to explain something.

Secondly, the whole world was divided into a number of countries. Every independent country has their own issues which do not want to share with other countries, so maybe I guess a great deal of secret codes would appear to hide it. It seems like using different languages.

There is no doubt about the convenience in assumption having a same language all over the world, but we need to consider the culture difference and the fact that sometimes it will be better having own language each countries.


Some people say (s a) speaking different languages can disturb the communication of different nationalities so it will be better to have (having) only one language in the world.
If we will only consider an aspect of communication, unified language would be effective (for it). People do not have to learn another language and worry about misunderstanding (from) the different use of similar words.
However, if we will choose (decide) one specific language to use everywhere, that (work) should go through very careful steps to put (together) our world together. It is because every language has its own reason to exist.

At first, we did not share the same culture so we have different customs. I think every language reflects the nation’s culture. For example, Koreans usually (too much) care too much of others’ feelings so they avoid speaking directly. This reflects their language to have diverse vocabularies of (same) similar meanings (to), so they have to use (it) them properly according to situations and counterpart. On the contrary, some countries like to mention directly without any misapprehension so they do not need several words to explain something.

Secondly, the whole world was divided into a number of countries. Every independent country has their own issues which they do not want to share with other (countries) state. So maybe I guess a great deal of secret codes would appear to hide it. It seems like using different languages.

There is no doubt about the convenience in assumption having a same language all over the world, but we need to consider the cultures differences and the fact that sometimes it (will be) is better (having own language) for each countries to have their distinct languages.


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