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In the past, if asian want to talk with western friends, writing letters or going to travel to meet them was only way to communicate each other. However, the advance of technology changed a lot. Communication on-line with others would be one of best advantagies by contemporary technology. We do not have to worry about that our letters could not reach to my friends' house safely, or we do not have to spend a great deal of money to get another country to meet and for face-to-face talks.
On-line chatting makes more simple and faster to get in touch with people in other countries by sending a simple message whenever we have something to share. Moreover, it is much cheaper to use on-line chatting than going the country to see face.
Meanwhile, there are several disadvantages to use on-line. The most serious drawback through on-line communication would be the danger of frauds from an illegal use of other name. Nowadays, "voice-fishing" is one of messy problem everywhere in the world, and it can be happened on-line, too. Someone sends a message like a friend and asks to borrow money. There is no barrier to use this pattern and trick international friends without any suspicion. Besides, some people might not prefer to get a message at specific time like night or early morning. However, others do not care about it and send messages or try to toal with someone whenever they want. Especially, we need to consider the time lag between far countries, even on-line use.
We need to use on-line properly to highlight the benefits and to reduece the drawbacks.

In the past, if asian want to talk with western friends, writing letters or going to travel to meet them was only way to communicate each other. However, the advance of technology changed a lot. Communication on-line with others would be one of best advantagies by contemporary technology. We do not have to worry about that our letters could not reach to my friends' house safely, or we do not have to spend a great deal of money to get another country to meet and for face-to-face talks.
On-line chatting makes more simple and faster to get in touch with people in other countries by sending a simple message whenever we have something to share. Moreover, it is much cheaper to use on-line chatting than going the country to see face.
Meanwhile, there are several disadvantages to use on-line. The most serious drawback through on-line communication would be the danger of frauds from an illegal use of other name. Nowadays, "voice-fishing" is one of messy problem everywhere in the world, and it can be happened on-line, too. Someone sends a message like a friend and asks to borrow money. There is no barrier to use this pattern and trick international friends without any suspicion. Besides, some people might not prefer to get a message at specific time like night or early morning. However, others do not care about it and send messages or try to toal with someone whenever they want. Especially, we need to consider the time lag between far countries, even on-line use.
We need to use on-line properly to highlight the benefits and to reduece the drawbacks.


In the past, if Asians want to talk with their western friends, writing letters or (going to) traveling to meet them (was) were the only ways to communicate with each other. However, the advance of technology has changed a lot. Communication on-line with others would be one of best advantages by contemporary technology. We do not have to worry (about that) if our letters could (not) reach (to my) our friends' houses safely, (or) and we do not have to spend a great deal of money to get to another country to meet and (for) have face-to-face talks.
On-line chatting makes (more) it simpler and faster to get in touch with people (in other countries.) abroad. (by sending) We can send a simple message whenever we have something to share. Moreover, it is much cheaper to use on-line chatting than going (the) to a country (to see face.)
personally.
Meanwhile, on-line usage also has its (there are several) disadvantages (to use on-line). The most serious drawback (through) about on-line communication would be the danger of frauds from an illegal use of other name. Nowadays, "voice-fishing" is one of the messy problems everywhere in the world, and it can (be) happen (ed) on-line, too. Someone will send a message like a friend and asks to borrow money. There is no barrier to use this pattern and trick international friends without any suspicion. Besides, some people might not prefer to get a message at a specific time like night or early morning. However, others do not care about it and send messages or try to toil (with) someone whenever they want. Especially, we need to consider the time lag between far countries, even on-line use.
We need to use on-line properly to highlight (the) its benefits and to reduce the drawbacks.


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