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That brother advices him push towards your goal. So he didn’t give up to study Koran. Not a year, he had new appointment that he was invited to Bethel in Korea. We had worked at bethel in Korea for more than one year. One day he was given a new appointment that let him go China to preaching. Because China has very serious security problem so many foreigners left China. China needed many brothers. When he got the new appointment at a first time, he was also afraid to go back to China. Because he heard about many news about security problems in China. So he prayed God sincerely. After pray he realized that God responses his all wishes. Even though he asked to God response only one of three. But God never forgot his wishes and replied three all. Even though he already forgot about his payers but God still remember all his wishes and replied. God know the best timing to reply our wishes. Sometimes we felt that God’s response is too late. But don’t forget that only God know the proper time. And God know what we need to and when we need to his helping. When I heard this brother’s story, I confident that if I gave him all, he must be with me always. When I quit my job and preaching in China, I also asked God two things. God already answered one wish. I’ve been waiting God’s reply for another one. I trust that God will response my wish.

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That brother's advice made him push towards his goal. So he didn’t give up studying Korean. In less than a year, he was invited to the Bethel in Korea. We had worked at a bethel in Korea for more than a year. One day he was given a new appointment to go to China to preach. That time China had a very serious security problem so many foreigners left the country. China needed many brothers. When he got his new appointment, he was also afraid to go back to China at first because he heard a lot of news about the security problems in China. So he prayed to God sincerely. After praying, he realized that God answered all he asked for. Even though he asked God to answer even only one of his three prayers, He answered all of them. He already forgot about his payers but God still remembered and answered them. God knows the best timing to reply to our prayers. Sometimes we feel that God’s response is too late but don’t forget that only He knows the proper time. And He knows what we need and when we need His help. When I heard his story, I became confident that if I gave him my all, He would always be with me. When I quit my job and preaching in China, I also asked God for two things. God already answered one of my prayers. I’ve been waiting for His God’s answer to other one. I trust that God will answer it. 


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