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When I came back to Korea, I focused on helping my bible student. I wanted to help her to improve in spiritual constantly. Actually I had plan to help her when she start to peaching and when she will be baptized. Because of pandemic I think it’s not easy to help her to be baptized. We never skip bible study every week during pandemic. I was never expecting that she can be baptized during pandemic. But God help her raise in spirituality. She stared to preaching in June and she finally got baptized in November in 2020. I realized that I just planted and watered, only God can makes it grow. Actually it’s not easy for her to start to preaching during pandemic. Even though I couldn’t be with her. When she called me said that how she had difficulty in many ways and cry. I could only do listened to her and cried with her. And I prayed everyday for her. I didn’t know how to help her. But after time I felt that God always be with her and help her. I really appreciated to God. When she got baptized, there was a security problem in China. So I didn’t expect that I could see when she god baptized. But God knew that what I need to. God let me to see when she baptized in online. I put my all energy into helping her to be baptized but after she got baptized, I felt that empty. I needed to something to put my energy. I never expected that I started to Hindi. When I was in China I watched ‘inside story’ of broadcasting, two couple who came from India and they said “please come to India, we need to many publishers.” That time China had very serious security.

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When I came back to Korea, I focused on helping my bible student. I wanted to constantly help improve her spiritual life. Actually, I planned to help her when she told me that she's going to be baptized. Because of the pandemic, I thought that it wouldn't be easy to help her to be baptized. We never skipped bible study every week during pandemic. I was never expecting that she could be baptized during pandemic. But God helped her grow in spirituality. She started preaching in June and she finally got baptized in November of 2020. I realized that I just planted and watered her spiritually but only God made her grow. Actually, it’s not easy for her to start preaching during pandemic. I couldn’t be with her so whenever she called me and said that she had difficulty in many ways, I cried. I could only listen to her and cry with her. And I prayed for her every day. I didn’t know how to help her. But I thank God because He was always with her and He helped her. When she got baptized, there was a security problem in China. So I didn’t expect that I could see her while she's being baptized. God knew that I really wanted to see her and He let me see her being baptized online. I put all my energy into helping her to get baptized. However, after she got baptized, I felt empty. I needed to do something to put my energy back. I never expected that I would start to speak Hindi. When I was in China I watched ‘Inside Story’. I saw a couple who came from India and they encouraged the viewers to come to India because they needed many publishers. It was less secure in China that time. 


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