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Pros and cons of Advertising.

Advertising helps people to decide which product will be suitable for themselves. If the advertising do not exist, maybe people have to use every product to figure out whether the product are proper or not. Also, we can learn trend through watching advertising natually so we do not have to spend time to look for it. Moreover, contemporary advertising is used not only for promotion of products but also for the public campaign. How cigarret is dangerous for smoker and behind smokers or how to keep rules by adversing is a kind of common ways to imprint good message.

On the other hand, an advertising can give people some confusion about a product as it gives false information about it. People can easily manipulated by the image in the advertising so they can overspend what they do not need at all. Esepcially, chidren can believe the image in the adversiting directly and make them buy it without any consideration.

Nowdays, there are some issues about wrong information thourgh advertisings. I think every advertising needs some regulation by goverment to protect customers. But, they need to make sure the guideline for advertising to not disturb every expression for it, especially for products for children.

Pros and cons of Advertising.

Advertising helps people to decide which product will be suitable for themselves. If the advertising do not exist, maybe people have to use every product to figure out whether the product are proper or not. Also, we can learn trend through watching advertising natually so we do not have to spend time to look for it. Moreover, contemporary advertising is used not only for promotion of products but also for the public campaign. How cigarret is dangerous for smoker and behind smokers or how to keep rules by adversing is a kind of common ways to imprint good message.

On the other hand, an advertising can give people some confusion about a product as it gives false information about it. People can easily manipulated by the image in the advertising so they can overspend what they do not need at all. Esepcially, chidren can believe the image in the adversiting directly and make them buy it without any consideration.

Nowdays, there are some issues about wrong information thourgh advertisings. I think every advertising needs some regulation by goverment to protect customers. But, they need to make sure the guideline for advertising to not disturb every expression for it, especially for products for children.


Pros and Cons of Advertising.

Advertising helps people to decide which product will be suitable for them (selves). If (the) advertising does not exist, maybe people have to use every product to figure out whether (the product) they are proper or not. Also, we can learn trend (through) by watching advertisements naturally so we do not have to spend time (to) looking for it. Moreover, contemporary advertising is used not only for promotion of products but also for the public campaign. How cigarette is dangerous for the first hand and second hand smokers (and behind smokers) or how to keep rules by advertisements is a (kind of) common way to imprint good message.

On the other hand, advertising can give people some confusion about a product as it gives false information (about it). People can be easily manipulated by the image in the advertisement so they (can) overspend buying those items that aren’t necessary. (what they do not need at all.) Especially, children (can) directly believe with the image they see in the advertisements (directly) and make them buy (it) without any consideration.

Nowadays, there are some issues (about) regarding wrong information on advertisements. I think every advertisement needs some regulation by the government to protect the customers. But, they need to make sure the guideline for advertising does not disturb every expression for it, especially (for) with the products for children.


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