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Are you really busy?

These days, most people says that they are busy. But I don’t think they are not really busy,
Beacause most peple feels fatigue from their several envimental parts like COVID-19, vaccination.
So they say that busy even they are not really busy. Sometimes someone says that I am busy while lying down a bed.
Of course some people really busy to do one’s work, but I think most people feels fatigue which has to things essentially.
In modern society, anyone can encounter many informations and others’s works even to whom do not want to konw.

These days, most people say that they are busy, but I don't think they really are, because most people feel fatigued from their several concerns in the society like COVID-19 and the vaccination, so they say that they are busy even if they are not. Sometimes, someone says that he's busy while lying on the bed. Of course, some people are really busy to do one's work, but I think most people feel fatigued when they have to do things essentially. In modern society, anyone can encounter many information and other's works even to whom they do not want to know.

Hello! 

You've written your ideas well regarding our topic, however there are some minor errors that you have to polish. First, a singular subject takes a singular verb (add -s or -es to the verb) and a plural subject takes a plural verb. Second, you should use fatigued not fatigue when you are describing how people feel and aside from fatigued, you can also use the words exhausted, tired, jaded, burned out and many more. Lastly, the right choice of words in your writing will make your meanings much clearer. Nevertheless, you've pointed out your insights well. Well done! 


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